Awaiting Orders
In one of my classes tomorrow, we take up Michael Herr’s classic about the Vietnam War, Dispatches. And to come at it from a certain angle, we’re also reading Tobias Wolff’s recent short-story from the New Yorker, “Awaiting Orders.” There are many moments of meanness and humanity in this magnificent story, but what I perhaps love the most is the way in which Iraq enters the narrative only as an extension of the battles right here around us and in our hearts.
Wolff and Herr have both in the past been connected to Syracuse University–and here is Wolff in an interview, speaking about detail in writing:
There’s a famous paragraph in one of Chekov’s letters to his brother Nikolai in which he talks about writing description. In it he says, ‘When describing a starry night, don’t just talk about the beauty of the heavens, and the beautiful pinpricks of stars all over the inky sky.’ He says, ‘describe a piece of broken glass and the moonlight shining in that, and all of a sudden a wolf runs past you like a black ball in the night.’
It’s that kind of odd angle of vision that really captures those unexpected things that you would find in a good story, that broken glass. That’s something very distinctive with Chekov. I translate that into the description of character as well. You can illuminate character by a similar kind of sidelong glance that you can use to illuminate that moonlit night.
There’s a kind of stock repertoire that comes out of drama, mainly of gestures and actions that people perform in stories. You know: the mixing-of-drinks, the-crossing-of-rooms, the-lighting-of-cigarettes. What’s wrong with them is they’re essentially anonymous. They don’t tell us that much. What you want is a gesture that tells you something particular.
And click here for a Salon interview where Wolff offers a marvelous little account of his interest in Chekhov.

